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Re: Love elegy
niteowl exactly rite free yourself a bit from rhythm
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Re: Chocolate
sorry u need 2 work on it a bit dosnt suit your age i expect this from the likes of 13 year olds gud luck nxt time
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Re: Aquarius orthodoxy
my fav poem i love the concept your def the best poet on this site no doubt your a unsung genius keep making more dude ....sum1 publish this kid lol ...
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Re: Tenement of clay
clever stuff great use of words nice 1 keep it up u make one of the best poems on this site
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Re: Jack pudding
great stuff :)
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Re: Groomed
you r a genius i love your stuff lets hope for more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :idea:
Feb 1, 2006